how's my driving?

[rosestolilies]

how's my driving? It's time for the Queen of Hearts bimonthly HMD post! Things to keep in mind: ♡ Participation is encouraged, but entirely optional. ♡ All criticism must be constructive. Be polite. Flames, wank, and personal attacks are not tolerated. Remember the Golden Rule here: treat others how you would like to be treated. Ask questions and start discussion if you don't know why a character acted a certain way. ♡ Anonymous commenting is enabled, but optional. If a player has requested that people do not reply anonymously to their HMD comment, please refrain from doing so. To participate, copy and paste the form below into a comment to this post: <b>Name:</b> Your name and/or personal journal. <b>Character(s):</b> <b>Anon accepted:</b> Y/N <b>Other comments:</b> For any known issues. If, say, you've been on hiatus for a while and would like that to be noted, or aware that your portrayal of X has been a little Y lately.

Comments

[esoteric_rose]

The main thing is...I feel like I've made her way more subdued than she should be. Grell's so loud and vibrant that although I can make allowances, I keep feeling like ehhhh. /lies here uselessly/ Maybe it's just finals, idk.

[jemerite]

Hrm. One thing that had occurred to me, as far as letting out her more mischievous/darker side goes, which is not quite that same as her loud side, was to perhaps use some darker pieces of literature as inspiration to cause some trouble. Shakespeare, Poe, Dorian, etc. I was rereading her dream with Fela from yonks ago where she got to do her Ophelia, and she really does thrive when she gets to be dramatic. Maybe that sort of extravagance would make up for the more subdued environment?

Just brainstorming aloud here! It may also just be time to change up characters, I don't think anyone would fault you for that after such a long run.

I need to stop being lazy myself and get Vivi's app written.

[esoteric_rose]

...8|a trouble does sound good. I'll probably pull out my older books, see if I can't gain an idea from that for some ~*drama*~. Thank you so much!

also Vivi 8D

[headlessfoal]

THE GIDDIEST LITTLE PONY.

BAM! POW! PEGASUS!

[esoteric_rose]

WHY IS SHE SO CUTE

[headlessfoal]

BECAUSE SHE HAS NO SOUL 8V She's a grinning, prancing killing machine!

[binaural]

YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO LOOK HAPPY WHILE YOU MURDER

[headlessfoal]

SHE ALWAYS LOOKS HAPPY. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

I just need to do the history, and I see you've been a good girl and typed up Therese's, so I should be able to make sure they at least don't contradict.

[binaural]

Oh, the freedom that comes from growing up in separate teams...

This is not helping the desire I had to app Therese anywhere so she could just disapprove at everything.

[headlessfoal]

WELL. MAYBE YOU SHOULD.

[binaural]

BUT. PERSONALITY SECTIONS.

[headlessfoal]

You've got half of one done just by taking instances from the history.