how's my driving?

[rosestolilies]

how's my driving? It's time for the Queen of Hearts bimonthly HMD post! Things to keep in mind: ♡ Participation is encouraged, but entirely optional. ♡ All criticism must be constructive. Be polite. Flames, wank, and personal attacks are not tolerated. Remember the Golden Rule here: treat others how you would like to be treated. Ask questions and start discussion if you don't know why a character acted a certain way. ♡ Anonymous commenting is enabled, but optional. If a player has requested that people do not reply anonymously to their HMD comment, please refrain from doing so. To participate, copy and paste the form below into a comment to this post: <b>Name:</b> Your name and/or personal journal. <b>Character(s):</b> <b>Anon accepted:</b> Y/N <b>Other comments:</b> For any known issues. If, say, you've been on hiatus for a while and would like that to be noted, or aware that your portrayal of X has been a little Y lately.

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[hungry_like_the_wolf]

Name: Sera/phita
Character(s): Gavril, Rumia, Taokaka
Anon accepted: Y/N
Other comments: Honestly, I'm having problems with Tao's speech pattern. Between Calamity Trigger and Continuum Shift she began speaking less in the third person and gained a more normal way of speaking. I'm trying to balance this and have really settled on her using the third person when excited or explaing herself and normal speech for everything else.

Gavril I think is fine, except I recently found out her name should have two l's in it but I'd like to think she's reached a good balance between being a scary monster and a person who is kind in her own way to those she likes. The series post-script also has her being rather sweet with her sisters, which isn't really important but it is adorable.

I just need to get Rumia out more, expect more of her soon.